Master Of Command Torrent ((hot)) Now

They call him the Master of Command Torrent now. But the old soldiers know the truth: he is not the master. He is just the first thing the flood swept along. If you tell me the genre or medium (TTRPG, novel, video game, etc.), I can refine the draft further.

Aris Vahn walked out of the trench last. He never blinked again. And when he gives an order, men do not hear words. They feel the weight of an entire river pressing against their backs, pushing them forward into the blades. master of command torrent

Draft opening:

General Aris Vahn had lost his voice on the third day of the Siege of Crimson Ford. By the fifth day, his lungs filled with the rain that would not stop. His soldiers found him standing in a trench, water up to his chin, eyes open but unseeing. They thought him dead. They call him the Master of Command Torrent now